Posts : 199 Join date : 2009-06-15 Age : 28 Location : Russia/Moscow
Subject: Re: Good or bad ? Sat Aug 29, 2009 1:00 pm
i am so kind that i can't say bad about dat :D
Himamathps
Posts : 16 Join date : 2009-08-29
Subject: Re: Good or bad ? Sat Aug 29, 2009 1:02 pm
hehe thx vir :))
N1ck tHL
Posts : 285 Join date : 2009-05-01
Subject: Re: Good or bad ? Sat Aug 29, 2009 7:58 pm
Well, its always hard to give crits on created parks especially since I can tell your good but I'll try. One thing I noticed is there is a lot of repetition in your tricks for example, you did a lot of spin outs with the pogo wich is good but it could have looked way more impressive had you used that and other manuals to spin out. Hyper spins would make it good to. Also I saw a Mctwist some where in there but which is fine but you should try the FS 540. Your 360 flips were a little overused but I have the same problem, just try to switch it up with grabs and other flip tricks. Also try to work on spinning your tricks a little better.
Overall it was good and I hope I can help.
Himamathps
Posts : 16 Join date : 2009-08-29
Subject: xDD Sun Aug 30, 2009 3:21 am
Well thank for the criticism i know i do pogo offen , it has just been a habit , its hard to not do pogo , and i know i have same trickuse very offen ^^ i'll try to change that ^^